A million haiku hugs to Kori P who wrote;
Here are three haikus I'm entering in your competition. They are all foot-related,
because I've been lusting after expensive shoes all day.
I wear platform heels
On silky, seashell-strewn sand.
Oh no, my ankle!
Waves lap steadily
Over my pink painted toes
I can’t feel my feet.
Why do tabi socks
Look so good with red platforms
On a hot Sunday?
(Thinking we are especially in love with the tabi sock and red platform idea!)
But Kori's poetic flow didn't stop there and we were so excited to get another...
Okay, I just entered a few haikus, but these things are totally addictive to write.
Here's another one:
The sun’s vapid heat
brings berries to stain my lips
like the sweetest kiss
Thanks!
Kori
OUCH they are just getting hotter. Oooh we are lapping up this summer Haiku lovin'!
This one from Lindsay is an inspiration, makes us want to Haiku all over town!
Thanks Haiku lovers you are filling us up and making things SO tricky to choose 2 winners! Keep em coming.
Comments (4)
Here is my Haiku - long time reader first time contributer!!
Dancing in the sun
could things get any better?
Yes! when you get here
sand in my shoes now
will always remind me of
sitting with you here
Posted by Sarah Jane Hough | July 14, 2007 9:29 AM
Posted on July 14, 2007 09:29
Hi Sarah,
Thanks for being a long time reader!!
I really like 2nd haiku.
Posted by TokyoMade | July 16, 2007 1:55 AM
Posted on July 16, 2007 01:55
I couldn't put my drawing with my haiku on the comment box so I sent an e-mail to contact@tokyomade.com
is that the right address?
Please tell me you got it!
Shareen!
Posted by shareen | July 16, 2007 12:05 PM
Posted on July 16, 2007 12:05
Perfect, we got it ! It is gorgeous thank you!
Posted by tokyomade | July 19, 2007 9:45 PM
Posted on July 19, 2007 21:45